新东方名师：“提纯”大学英语四级作文范文

　　连贯性(coherence)：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。

　　完整性(completeness)：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。

　　再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。

　　1. It has been shown that … …

　　类似句型：It is known to us that … …

　　It is said that … …

　　It is reported that … …

　　It is controversial that … …

　　2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。

　　3. enable v. 使…能够

　　I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.

　　4. in that = because

　　表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：

　　The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.

　　此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：

　　Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。

　　最后，提纯范文“措辞”。

　　1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。

　　2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的

　　形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions

　　a multitude of

　　a great deal of

　　a large amount of

　　plenty of

　　many a

　　3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。

　　I argue that … …

　　I maintain that … …

　　I claim that … …

　　I insist that … … = I think that … …

　　I hold that … …

　　I assert that … …

　　I assume that … …