新东方：英语四级考试作文30天学习笔记(2)

　　注：1. 本段开始举例

　　2. Let's take……for example 中间是插入语，表示强调，举例不宜太长。

　　In conclusion, I believe that everyone is born equal and is the builder of his own fate We can have good fortune only if we take pains and work hard. We should bear the following saying in mind, “Every man is the master of his own fate.”

　　注：bear sth. in mind：把……牢记在心

　　范文13. The Way to Success

　　第二段：Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.

　　He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Dr. Sun Yat-sen was such a man. Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty. Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study. Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep attentive to studies. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Life is short and we have many things to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything.

　　II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构

　　Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点(general);

　　(2) 具体描述这个事物或者观点(或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法specific)。

　　Paragraph 2: (1) 作者对该现象货问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句;

　　(2) 支持性的细节分论点(至少两点);

　　(3) 本段总结(可以省略)。

　　Paragraph 3: (1) 总结全文，定下结论(通常为我的对策或看法)。

　　四级作文试题2000年1月

　　Directions:

　　For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1. 上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多多种途径解决。

　　2. 哪种途径适合我(说明理由)。

　　How I Finance My College Education

　　How I Finance My College Education

　　第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点：

　　Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.

　　第二段：有多种的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱

　　第二段主题句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.

　　第二段分写：

　　In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.

　　In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank

　　loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.

　　What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.

　　第三段：我所赞同的方法(阐述原因，为何不选其他的方法)。

　　Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.