新东方：英语四级考试作文30天学习笔记(3)

　　第二段细节论证

　　分析原因：

　　1、Among the most convincing/ important reasons given/ cited/ offered/ identified by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one should be stressed/ emphasized/ mentioned...

　　2、One may regard/ see/ view/ think of the trend/ increase/ phenomenon as a sign of/ result of/ response to/ reaction to ...

　　3、The increase/ change/ failure/ success in ... mainly/ largely/ partly results from/ arises from is due to/ owing to/ attributable to the fact that/ several factors ...

　　Several years ago, many students were

　　enrolled in/ admitted to/ taken in/ matriculated popular major, so that the supply is superior to/ outweigh/ exceeds the demand. Many graduates are reluctant to work in the remote areas/ western provinces/ developing areas/ less developed country. Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as ...

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　　III、图表题(table, bar graph, pie chart, line graph)

　　图表题的写作逻辑结构：

　　Paragraph I:(1)概括描述图表：趋势描写;

　　(2)具体描述图表：必要数据支持(细节性)。

　　Paragraph II:(1)提出自己理由和观点(本段主题句);

　　(2)细节性分论点(主要是原因，用于支持自己的观点，至少两点)。

　　Paragraph III:(1)预测未来和提出解决方法;

　　(2)总结全文和表达作者自己观点。

　　【标题】Changes in People’s Diet

　　Directions: Write a three-paragraph composition to:

　　1. State the changes in people’s diet in the past five years.

　　2. Give possible reasons for the changes.

　　3. Draw your own conclusion.

　　You should quote as few figures as possible.

　　【短文】Changes in People’s Diet

　　In the past five years there have been many changes in people’s diet. Grain, as the main food of most Chinese, is now playing a less important role, while the proportion of some high-energy foods, such as milk and meat, has increased.

　　What has caused these changes? I think there are two reasons. First, people now have more money. The price of meat and milk is much higher than that of grain, so in the old days people couldn’t afford them. Now they have enough money to buy both meat and milk. Second, people nowadays pay more attention to the elements of their diet. They look for a well-balanced diet that will be good for their health.

　　In short, there have been changes in people’s diet in the past five years because of financial and health reasons, and there will be further changes in the future.