英语四六级考试作文评分标准及错误总结

　　八、垂悬修饰语

　　1) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has been greatly improved.

　　Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living standard.

　　2)To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once.

　　To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.

　　九、平行错误

　　1) While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.

　　While we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of traffic.

　　2) Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.

　　Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course. / Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.

　　十、搭配错误

　　1) In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.

　　2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

　　Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

　　十一、破句

　　1) Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview.

　　Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.

　　2) First you should show good manners. Because the first impression you leave on others is important.

　　First you should show good manners, because the first impression you leave on others is important.