2009年6月英语四级考前热点高分范文(七)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Social Practice of College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)各大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践活动

　　2)这些活动给大学生带来了哪些好处

　　3)参加社会实践活动应该注意些什么

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　　行文思路

　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象带来的好处，提纲第3点要求指出注意事项，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：概述大学生社会实践活动及其主要内容;分析社会实践活动给大学生带来的好处;指出大学生参加社会实践应该注意些什么。

　　高分范文

　　Social Practice of College Students

　　Nowadays many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities. During the holidays, more and more students choose to [1]be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike. It’s obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in China’s college education.

　　[2]Undoubtedly, college students have [3]benefited a lot from social practice. [4]Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside the campus. [4]Moreover, in social practice activities, students can [5]apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems. So their practical skills are improved greatly. [4]Besides, social practice helps [6]strengthen students’ sense of social responsibility.

　　[7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice. [4]However, social practice may bring some problems. For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study. [4]Therefore, we should try to [8]balance the relationship between social practice and study.

　　【亮点点评】

　　[1]平行结构。alike意为“类似的”，作后置定语。

　　[2]“毫无疑问”，副词使用恰当。

　　[3]“从…中受益很多”。

　　[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

　　[5]“把知识运用到解决实际问题中”。

　　[6]“加强社会责任感”。

　　[7]用于得出结论。considering用作介词，意为“考虑到，鉴于”。

　　[8]“平衡…之间的关系”。