2009年12月大学英语四六级高分写作技法和范文

　　- 根据文章的叙述重点，总结全文，提出方法等。

　　例证

　　标题： My View on College Students' Part-time Jobs

　　提纲： 1 )有人认为大学生做兼职工作很有好处;

　　2 )然而，有人认为大学生做兼职工作弊多利少;

　　3 )我的看法

　　Nowadays, an increasing number of college students are doing part-time jobs. People hold different opinions on that.

　　Some people think that there are many advantages for college students to have part-time jobs. Firstly, part-time jobs offer them opportunities to apply what they have learned in school and demonstrate their abilities. Secondly, it enables them to be more independent of their family and builds up their self-confidence. Thirdly, part-time experiences may be of great help to their future careers. Finally, part-time jobs can broaden their college lives and help them know more of themselves and society.

　　However, some other people hold that doing part-time jobs has more disadvantages. The main job of college students is to study, not to work. If they have part-time jobs, they may have to reduce their time for sleep, rest, study and activities. Working several hours a day consumes a lot of time and energy and may affect their studies. As a result, they may find it hard to adjust to what the college expects of them as well as their employers expect, and finally, they may fall behind or fail in their studies.

　　In my opinion, students can choose to take up a part-time job according to their own situation. The most important thing for them is to keep a good balance between part-time jobs and his study.

　　谋篇布局( 3 )

　　- 将提示的第一句和第二句合为第一段，于段尾提出自己的观点;

　　- 说明自己的理由;

　　- 结论段总结全文

　　例文

　　标题： How to Achieve Success

　　提纲： 1 )有人说成功主要靠运气;

　　2 )有人则认为成功主要靠勤奋，与运气毫无关系 ;

　　3 )我的观点

　　Some people say the key to success is the luck, while others claim it is hard work. As far as I am concerned, there are many factors contributing to success and the three fundamental ones are diligence, devotion and perseverance.

　　Diligence is the first key factor to success. Diligence helps us remove ignorance, overcome difficulties, and enlighten our minds. It makes a fool wise, and a poor man rich. Devotion is another factor to success. Whatever we do, we must love it and do it whole-heartedly. Only when we set our minds on the job, can we do it well. Furthermore, perseverance, or a strong will, is the last key to success. Without a strong will, we are likely to give up when we meet some difficulties, let alone perform wonderful deeds.