2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作全面解读(4)

　　四、模板套用

　　2009年12月 六级真题实例

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short passage entitled Should parents send their kids to art classes? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:

　　现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班;

　　1. 对这种做法有人表示支持;

　　2. 有人并不赞成;

　　3. 我认为…

　　套用模板一

　　【审 题】分析题目，此作文属于对比选择类文章，并且题目中已经给出提纲，考生只需要按照提纲写出：支持的理由、反对的理由、我的观点。但最好在前面加上一个引言段。引言可以是简单的对全文观点的总结，也可以是相关争议的背景介绍。支持送孩子学艺术的理由不外乎成就艺术天才和培养兴趣爱好;反对的理由不外乎孩子压力过大和顺其自然等。结尾段总结自己的观点，具备实力的考生还要写出点新意，运用闪光词汇。

　　【思路一】第一段：指出现象，以及相关争议的背景介绍;

　　第二段：支持送孩子学艺术的理由;

　　第三段：反对送孩子学艺术的理由;

　　第四段：“我”的观点。

　　【范文一】

　　Should Parents Send their Kids to Art Classes?

　　(1)Children are the future of the nation, (2)the pearl in their parents’ eyes. Hoping that their kids can become the cream of the crop among others, more and more parents send their kids to various art classes to let them learn more. However, people hold different opinions toward this phenomenon.

　　(3) (4)Some individuals maintain that attending classes is aimed to broaden their kids’ horizon and enrich their knowledge in that the kinds can get acquainted with peers from different family background. (5)In the class, exposed to a big family they will learn how to cooperate with each other and how to develop a harmonious relationship with his her classmates, which is absolutely essential when children grow up.

　　There are some people who hold different opinions. They argue that because some kids put in a large amount of time in the class, they even can’t set aside time to stay together with their parents and share their feeling, good or bad, with their family members.

　　(6)As far as I am concerned, just as every coin has two sides, it is true to the phenomenon discussed above. If children can display their potential and they are interested in what they are doing, (7)then parents are expected to provide the children a chance to give a full play of their ability. But if they are disgusted at the class, parents are supposed to support their kids to be engaged in other activities.

　　【点 评】

　　范文点评：

　　(1)开门见山对相关争议的背景做简单介绍。

　　(2)the pearl in their parents’ eyes掌上明珠，语言地道。

　　(3) Some individuals maintain that…引出支持孩子学艺术的理由。

　　(4)使用亮点词汇 broaden their kids’ horizon and enrich their knowledge，develop a harmonious relationship with。