2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作全面解读(4)

　　(5) There are some people who hold different opinions.

　　引出反对孩子学艺术的理由。

　　(6)使用As far as I am concerned引出自己的观点。

　　(7) give a full play of their ability “充分发挥才能”

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　　【思路二】

　　第一段：对送孩子学艺术，人们观点不一;有人赞成，有人反对，而我认为最适合的才是最好的;

　　第二段：我支持送孩子学艺术的理由;

　　第三段：我不赞成的做法及理由;重申个人观点。

　　【范文二】

　　Should Parents Send their Kids to Art Classes?

　　(1)There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing trend for parents to send the children to art training classes of all kinds. Different people hold different views. Some contend that attending art classes can help nurture children’s interest and tap their potentials in such art as music, painting and dancing. However,others think forcing them to go to art classes may only restrict their freedom and affect their healthy growth. (2)Considering one after another, I believe that both sides have something right.

　　(3)For one thing, it must be admitted that going to art classes is and effective means to find out and give full play to children’s talent in art. For another, by attending art classed, the children can have an all-round development by acquiring knowledge and skills which are not taught in their schools. What’s more, it is conducive to their sound development. kids can also make a lot of friends there, thus their communication skills may also be sharpened.

　　(5) However, Every coin has two sides. These courses would bring about heavy burdens to students and thus oppose to this practice. In addition, the students might not have adequate time to take rest and reflect on what they have learned in school. Therefore, (6)it is not advisable for parents to deprive their children of the right to choose to learn what they truly like. Remember, the fittest is the best.

　　【点 评】

　　范文点评：

　　(1)使用句型There is no denying the fact tha引出现象，概括不同人的观点，最后表明自己的立场。

　　(2) 使用Considering one after another引出自己的观点。

　　(3)使用For one thing,…For another,…What’s more,…来扩展文章，从而使观点层次清晰，论证有力。

　　(4) give full play to children’s talent，have an all-round development，be conducive to等成为文章亮点词汇。

　　(5) 使用However使观点发生转折，引出自己不赞成的做法和理由。bring about heavy burdens to “是…的负担”

　　(6) 使用it is not advisable for…to do …自己的建议。

　　(7)the fittest is the best. “最适合的就是最好的”，此句简短有力，使自己的观点更加鲜明。

　　2008年6月 六级真题实例

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　　【审 题】本题要求写一篇议论文，属观点对立型和问题解决型作文的糅合与拼接。考题属于常规性题目，但又与时俱进，侧重于对校园内学生除学习外的娱乐方式的关注。选材体现了当今社会教育取向的变化，由关注学生学习成绩向全面发展素质教育转变。

　　【思路一】第一段：引入现象：现在娱乐活动多种多样并列举其益处及原因;

　　第二段：列举娱乐活动的弊处及原因;

　　第三段：表明自己的观点态度：寓乐于学。

　　【范文一】

　　Recreational Activities

　　(1) When it comes to recreational activities， different people hold different views. (2) Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study. (3) Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically; (3) while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally.

　　(4) However, other people hold that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives. Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities, and indulge themselves in those activities. At last they are (5) lured away from their study or their work.

　　(6) In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them. Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively and make them a helpful tool for our development. 【点 评】

　　(1) 开门见山，引出主题

　　(2) 引出支持者的观点及原因

　　(3) 列举有益处的娱乐活动

　　(4) 话锋一转，引出反对者的观点及原因

　　(5) 精彩短语：受诱惑而荒废学业或工作

　　(6) 阐述我的观点：寓乐于学

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　　【思路二】第一段引入现象：现在娱乐活动多种多样;

　　第二段列举娱乐活动的弊益及原因;

　　第三段表明自己的观点态度：不能因噎废食，建议娱乐要有度。