2010年6月大学英语四级考试写作思路突破(5)

　　第一部分 写作——特训练习与范文

　　训练一

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Graduates Work as Village Officials. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1. 你是否认为大学生当村官是个好主意;

　　2. 大学生能给乡村提供些什么;

　　3. 大学生能从村官职位中获得什么。

　　College Graduates Work as Village Officials

　　训练二

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Boom in Continuing Education. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)上图为某城市2002-2008年参加继续教育的人数情况，请描述其中的变化;

　　2)分析导致该变化的原因;

　　3)谈谈你对继续教育的看法。

　　训练三

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Water Shortage. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

　　1. 水资源短缺已成为严重问题;

　　2. 造成水资源短缺的原因;

　　3. 提出解决方案。

　　On Water Shortage

　　答案与解析

　　训练一

　　【范文】

　　College Graduates Work as Village Officials

　　Nowadays many college graduates choose to work as village officials in the remote areas. To this, people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view while others are against it. As far as I am concerned, I believe that it is a wise choice.

　　Above all, college graduates can contribute a lot to the development of the countryside. First, they can apply their professional knowledge there. Secondly, they can introduce new concepts to the countryside and speed the development of rural culture. As a result, the gap between the city and the countryside can well be bridged. In addition, these graduates can benefit a lot from working as village officials. While too many college graduates are fighting for the handful of positions in big cities, these graduates can find themselves a wider stage of development and realize their value.

　　Therefore, college graduates working as village officials is a win-win choice and more graduates should be encouraged to work in the countryside.

　　【点评】

　　文章描述大学生当村官这一现象，并分析其带来的诸多好处。第二段运用Above all, in addition, 引出了两点好处，在使用First, Secondly将第一点好处细化，这样使文章层次清晰。本文使用了一些精彩的语言，使文章增色不少，例如：contribute a lot to，speed the development，a win-win choice等等。

　　训练二

　　【范文】

　　A Boom in Continuing Education

　　From the graph, we can learn the number of continuing education participants has kept increasing from 2002 to 2008 in X city. In 2002 there were only 20 thousand people taking part in the continuing education, but in 2004 the number grew to 70 thousand, and in 2006 150, and by 2008, the number has reached 230 thousand. It can be seen easily that continuing education is gaining more and more popularity。