2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作全面解读(9)

　　According to the above statements, we can see that what one needs is a strong will.Weak-willed people never climb to the top.They crumble at the slightest use of force against them.Strong-willed people, on the other hand,will stand up against all odds and will make it a point to succeed ultimately.

　　【点评】

　　本文属于观点论证型作文。其中的观点是一句英语谚语。文章首先以解释说明谚语的含义入手进入主题，紧接着分析成功与失败的原因，逐步论证毅力对于成功至关重要这一观点，最后总结说明一个人要取得成功所要具备的素质。这样文章对观点的分析透彻又有深度。另外文中使用的精彩语句包括：due to，many a famous man，overcome apparently insuperable obstacles，stand up against all odds等等。

　　模拟训练三

　　【范文】

　　A Campaign Speech

　　Good morning, everyone:

　　I am a sophomore student.I am especially honored in having this chance today to work out a new prospect of our Student Union.

　　As for the position of President, I find I am quite qualified.Firstly, I do possess the ability required of this post.In the past 2 years, I have been serving as Class President, and I know the importance and art of management.In addition, my personality fits ideally in for the past.I have been growing up in a loving environment, nursing an optimistic nature out of me.And in my dictionary, there is no such word as “difficulty”.Last but not least, nothing can be more important than my various hobbies in helping build up a teamwork with fellow students.

　　My fellow students, if I am fortunately chosen to be President by you, I’ll do my utmost.I’ll work to build up a fantastic teamwork to better the efficiency of the Union and better serve the student body.More exciting and significant activities are awaiting you to participate in.I won’t let you down.

　　Thanks for your attention.

　　【点评】

　　本文是一篇竞选演讲词。文章首先表达心情，做一下简单自我介绍，进一步说明自己竞选此职务的原因，最后展望未来做出承诺，以表示感谢的语句结束演讲。文章符合演讲的格式以及内容要求。其中精彩语句，例如：work out a new prospect，an optimistic nature，build up a teamwork with，以及句式I won’t let you down.的使用使文章极具煽动力，起到很好的演讲效果。