通常提纲作文都是给出三个提纲,每个提纲即是一段,正好符合四级作文“三段论”的布局。但赵文通老师在此提醒同学们需要注意的是:当给出的提纲小于三个时,比如只给出了两个提纲,那么其中的一个提纲就要分成两段来写。
写作范文1
1.运动的积极因素
2.运动的消极因素
3.你的体会
Sports benefit us in many respects.(根据main idea 写出topic sentence。) When taking part in sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our bodies. There is no doubt that proper sports activities keep our physical fitness. Furthermore, sports can enrich our life and maintain our psychological health. Through participation, everyone can learn that on the playground he not only struggles for himself but also fights for his team. Sports teach us about consideration, cooperation and optimism to failure.(关键词的并列往往可以给阅卷人留下深刻的印象。)
But sports can do some harm to those who cannot plan their activities properly. Too hard training may hurt their bodies, exhaust their vigor, and even cause them to become sick.
In general, I love sports. I enjoy sports. For sports not only help me to live a well-balanced life, but also provide me with opportunities to get closer to nature. Sports add happiness to my everyday life when I perform in a decent way.(decent这个词用得恰到好处,在这里也正是“恰到好处”的意思。)
写作范文2
Advertisement
1.广告给人们带来的益处
2.广告给人们带来的烦恼
3.如何正确利用广告的作用
Advertisement can be a service to people. First, it is informative, and can help people buy and sell goods. Second, it can widen people's knowledge, and make people more experienced. Lastly, people can enjoy themselves through those programs which advertisements have been put into.(分条举例说明广告的益处。)
Some advertisements, however, are not very useful to people, sometimes even harmful. An advertisement like this, for example, may put thousands of women and girls into trouble. "Disillusioned with life, love, marriage? You need help. Phone me." And the Savior gives his phone number to his sheep.
In modern times, many advertisements are subjective rather than objective, persuasive rather than informative.(说理客观。) The only purpose of these advertisements is to persuade people to buy their poorly made products. Therefore, it is wise for people to make sure the advertisements are telling the truth.(根据提纲中第三段的主旨来写如何正确利用广告。)
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