第 1 页:关于"if...then"和"if"从句 |
第 2 页:关于"even though"和"although"从句 |
第 3 页:关于"so...that..."或"such... that..."或"so..."从句 |
第 4 页:避免过多适用"in order to ..." |
第 5 页:不要过于依赖"because ..."从句 |
避免过多适用"in order to ..."
Plain: In order to advance his or her career, a genius needs strong financial support.
Interesting: All geniuses need a millionaire to further their careers.
Plain: During rush hours in Hanoi, cars often scoot into bike lanes in order to get ahead of the traffic jams. This forces bikers to hug the curbs*.
Interesting: During rush hours in Hanoi, cars often scoot into bike lanes to cut through traffic jams, forcing bikers to hug the curbs.
Plain: In order to prepare for millions of visitors for millennium celebrations, the city has launched many projects, some ambitious, some modest, to beautify and modernize itself.
Better: Some projects are ambitious, others modest, and all will beautify and modernize a city expecting millions of visitors for millennium celebrations.
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