名师示范英语六级写作套路：分三步展开

　　In my opinion, we should never cheat. Dishonesty runs against our traditional virtue (与传统美德相背离)and does harm to those who cheat. Meanwhile, we need to put in place powerful laws.

　　F 2003, 12 reduce waste on campus

　　--〉校园里浪费现象很严重(体现：食物，水龙头，电器，小馆子吃饭等等)

　　Waste problem increasingly stands out in schools.(浪费现象日益突出) In the canteen, students throw away more than they eat; in the washroom, the tap is never turned off; even in an empty classroom, the lights are always on. Similar examples have virtually become a staple on campus(类似的例子成了学校的一道风景线/举不胜举)

　　从观点的多个层次描写：浪费不好 1，资源有限，浪费普遍资源则后代倒霉

　　1， 养成不良习惯为以后的工作生活增加负担3，与节俭的传统美德相背离;在高等学府里浪费更是教育的耻辱。

　　Waste, whenever it happens, should be condemned (谴责)for the following reasons. Firstly, in this populous country(人口众多的国家), we have relatively limited resources. If we go on wasting human’s common resources, our decedents will suffer from hunger or even starve(挨饿). What’s more, such a behavior on campus will lead to a bad habit in your later work or life. Your expenses (花销)will rise as a result. Lat but not least, waste, on whatever occasion, goes against our traditional virtue(传统价值观) and puts to shame our education.(让我们的教育蒙羞)

　　个人认为浪费不好，需要共同努力，学校对学生说服教育，个人也要加强自觉。

　　From my point of view, waste is everything to be blamed. We need to join hands for the solution of this problem. The school should educate the students while the individuals should cooperate and behave themselves.

　　G 1996.6 health gained in developing countries(图标类文章不能生硬的简单描述。)

　　à 图标表明寿命从40-60短短30年涨了20年，比较而言，儿童死亡从-下降到--，降幅达到。什么促成了这个现象

　　As clearly stated in the graph, life expectancy increased dramatically, up from 40 to 60, in 30 years. By contrast, infant mortality dropped by 15%, down from 25% to 10% during the same period. What has contributed to this development?

　　从观点的多个层次描写：1，医疗技术的进展，治愈顽疾，抢救儿童2，生活水平的提高(吃住)，追求健康饮食和适当锻炼3 技术降低灾害的损失，其中妇女，儿童最倒霉。

　　First and foremost, the advance in medical science and technology has enabled us to cure many originally fatal diseases(治愈原本致命的疾病) and save millions of babies that could have died before, at or after birth. (出生前，出身时，出身后)The second reason has much to do with a good system(第二个原因与—有关) in which everyone is covered by timely medi-care(每个人享受免费医疗). What’s more, people now enjoy a happier life. No longer satisfied with a full stomach and warm clothing(不仅仅满足吃饱穿暖), we turn to a balanced diet (将注意力转向均衡饮食)and go in for physical exercises(参加体育运动). Last but not least, technology has reduced the occurrence /incidence (发生)of disasters as well as minimized the damages and injuries(姜损伤和危害降到最低). Otherwise, women and children would suffer most.

　　个人认为好现象，但是需要控制人口增长，否则前途未卜。

　　In my opinion, this means people can live a longer and better life. However, only god knows whether this is a curse or bless if the population explosion is not brought under control.