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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Young People Should Have Combatant Spirit. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:
1)现在很多年轻人缺乏拼搏精神
2)导致这一问题的原因是什么
3)大学生应该加强拼搏精神
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出一个问题,指纲第2点要求分析导致该问题的原因,提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述年轻人缺乏拼搏精神的现状;分析导致这一问题的原因;说明大学生应该如何加强拼搏精神。
【参考范文】
Young People Should Have Combatant Spirit
Nowadays, quite a few people believe that combatant spirit is essential for one’s success in today’s competitive world. However, some young people today think nothing of this spirit which,in their opinion, is only needed in revolutionary age. Even worse, when facing the difficulties, they will choose to yield or cower without making any efforts.
There are many factors resulting in young people’s lack of combatant spirit. Among these, comfortable living environment plays a vital role. Today’s parents provide nearly everything to the children, which results in the children’s lack of motivation for striving on their own. What’s more, the present education system does not pay much attention to help the young people build up the combatant spirit.
Considering the importance of combatant spirit, I think it is high time to take effective measures to strengthen young people’s combatant spirit. Above all, parents shouldn’t spoil their children and should ask their children to strive for what they intend to obtain. Moreover, schools should build a better environment for students to develop their struggle and aggressive spirit. Besides, young people themselves should adjust their minds and follow the examples of those people in history or around us who achieve their success under the stimulation of combatant spirit. In a word, it is an urgent thing for today’s young people to enhance combatant spirit.
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