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2003年
66. Directions:
Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should
1) describe the set of drawings,interpret its meaning,and
2) point out its implications in our life.
You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
温室花朵经不起风雨
范文
The above two pictures have shaped sharp contrast to each other. In one picture, a flower grows in a greenhouse and is in full bloom in spite of the outside rain. But in the other, the flower, moved outside and without the protection of the greenhouse, is withering in the thunderstorm. The two pictures show us that the flower, which is raised in a greenhouse and carefully protected, cannot stand natural wind and rain at all.
It is most likely that the drawer means to compare children in our country to the flower in his drawings and reflect a problem in the present education of our children. For one thing, nowadays, most children are brought up by their parents with tender care. Parents always try their best to meet the childrens demands, to provide them with the best environment of growth and study and to protect them from any possible harms, setbacks and sufferings. For another, owing to the present examinationoriented education system, most children are too heavily burdened with studies to have time to take part in social activities, so they learn little about the society, the real world outside their family and school. Growing up in such a manner and such an environment, the children will inevitably and naturally lack the ability to stand sufferings and overcome obstacles when they leave their parents and step into the society.
To sum up, the problem of childrens education must be solved timely and effectively because it is they that constitute the future of our country.
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2004年
66. Directions:Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
1) describe the drawing,
2) interpret its meaning,and
3) support your view with examples.
You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
终点又是新起点
范文
Section Ⅳ Writing
In the picture presented to us, there is a boy running on annular tracks and reaching the finishing line. Heavily sweating as he is, a happy smile hangs on his lips. However, as an arrow marked “End” points on the finishing line, there occurs another arrow marked with “Beginning”.
Though this picture only describes a runner who is going to start a new run after reaching the finishing line, yet it demonstrates a universal law that governs the development of mankind. In other words, if we want to make constant progress we must keep forging ahead instead of resting on laurels. Robertson once said, “Whenever he is satisfied with what he does, he has reached his culminating point—he will progress no more.”
This reminds me of Picasso, whose works greatly influenced the path of 20thcentury art. But what has impressed me most is not the notable success he has achieved but his enterprising spirit. Besides “the greatest artist of the 20th century”, he is acclaimed as “the youngest artist in the world” because he unremittingly pursued and explored new styles of painting all his life. After producing his most famous postimpressionist style, he later developed many other styles and even at the last moment of his life he was producing a new painting.
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2005年
Part A
51. Directions:
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.You do not need to write the address. (10 points)
范文
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)
Dear Mr. Wang,
It was very kind of you to give me this opportunity to work as an editor, but now I am very sorry to say that I have to quit my present job.
The chief reason is that I find the job is not as challenging as I have thought. I have been asked to do the jobs of checking and proofreading instead of accomplishing creative tasks such as inventing and formulating. Besides, the pay also turns out to be lower than my expectation.
I am sure that my working experience here will benefit me in my future career. I do apologize for any inconvenience cause by my resignation, and I wish you all the best.
Best regards.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Part B
52. Directions:
Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
范文
What a distressing irony to see such a special “football” match! The ball is an old father, and none of the four goal keepers, three sons and a daughter, would let the “ball” go into their goals. The father can do nothing but huddle himself up in the middle of the field. Looking at the picture, I believe, every reader with conscience will feel intensely pained by the pitiful situation of the father and the hardhearted filial impiety of the sons and the daughter.
It is no doubt that the sons and the daughter are to be condemned. Father is the person who has brought them up with great love. How can they treat him so cruelly? Filial piety has been advocated as a traditional Chinese virtue throughout history. Every step of a childs growth, from birth to death, bears so much time and energy of the parents and above all, their unselfish love. So our parents rightly deserve our reward—love, respect, care and support. Whats more, family relationship is very much like a mirror. If you smile upon it, it will smile back upon you. By treating our parents kindly, we will set an example for our sons and daughters and gain their respect and love in return.
In a word, it is our innate obligation to be filial to our parents.
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2006年
Part A
51. Directions:
You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.
Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inquire the possibility of providing financial aid for a proper candidate.
I wish that you could find a primary schoolgirl in the rural areas of western China. More often than not girls drop out of school there for the lack of money. I plan to offer 3000 yuan per year up until she finishes secondary education. If she can enter university, I will continue to support her until she graduates and finds a job.
I wish that it would not be too difficult to find such a candidate. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Part B
52. Directions:
Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should
1. describe the photos briefly,
2. interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them,
3. give your point of view.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
范文
The photos show two big fans of Beckham—a British football star. One writes the stars name on his face and the other is having his hair made an expensive Beckham style.
From them, we can vividly sense the enthusiasm of hero worship, which is an ordinary phenomenon in modern society. As a matter of fact, with mass media and multiculture fast developing, hero worship covers an increasingly large scope. People from all walks of life, usually if they are successful, outstanding or popular, may be admired by others.
Hero worship is not absolutely right or wrong. It depends on what the worshipper does for his idol. If handled appropriately, hero worship may stimulate the positive aspects in us, such as passion for life, motivation for work and noble values. Learning from our idols we can gain enlightenment, encouragement and qualities that we need when we strive for a career. By loving them, we can add color to our life and explore a larger range of social experiences.
But as everything has its limits, hero worship will bring adverse effects beyond proper control. If we are indulged in it and lose ourselves, we will be shaded by our idols and then what will be the meaning of our personal life?
Therefore, the key lies in whether we can maintain our independence and individuality. It is up to us to live in the shadow or the sunshine of the heroes we admire.
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2007年
Part A
51. Directions:
Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to raise some suggestions for improving the service of our university library.
Generally speaking, the library functions well, but there are still several problems. To begin with, more librarians should work in the circulation hall so that students can borrow and return books more quickly. In addition, the opening hours should be lengthened so that more students can take advantage of the library. Last but not least, the computer room should be expanded so that more students can gain access to the Intranet and the Internet.
I will be grateful if my suggestions receive your favorable consideration, and I firmly believe that the service level will be improved significantly in the near future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Part B
52. Directions:
Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) support your view with an example/examples.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
范文
In the picture, there shapes a sharp conflict between the goal keeper and the ball player. The former exaggerates the goal and minimizes himself in his mind while the latter thinks otherwise. Actually, both the goal and the keeper are just in normal size. What causes the problem is that they have overestimated the difficulty they are each faced with. Such attitude towards difficulty will surely produce negative effects on the results.
Difficulties are in the pathway of everyone. To overcome them, we must at first make correct judgment on the situation, which is based on confidence, courage and rational thinking. Lets take memory for example. In the process of learning, students need to remember a lot of things, such as Chemical Elements Periodic Table, ancient articles and mathematical formulae. But many complain that it is hard to remember them accurately and they are ready to give up when they feel so. On the contrary, those who learn successfully are confident about themselves and willing to try although they also feel difficult at first. And later they find the more they practise the memory, the easier it becomes to remember.
In conclusion, if we are to succeed in handling the difficult things, we must have selfconfidence, judge the situation rationally and be courageous enough to keep trying.
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2008年
Part A
51. Directions:
You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to
1) make an apology, and
2) suggest a solution.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
范文
Dear Bob,
I have arrived in Shanghai yesterday and I want to show my gratitude to you for your hospitality.
I am so sorry that I have forgotten to return the music CD that you lent me last month and I decide to send it back as soon as possible. Together with it is another CD of traditional Chinese music as a gift for you, which I hope that you will enjoy it very much.
I wish I had not caused too much trouble for you. Thank you again for the help you gave me during my stay in Canada. Please tell me if you visit China some day and I can be your tour guide.
Best regards.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Part B
52. Directions:
Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
你一条腿，我一条腿，
你我一起，走南闯北
范文
The picture presents a touching sight to us. Two handicapped men are walking quite quickly by binding their disabled legs together and holding fast to each others shoulders, with their crutches left behind. What respectable persons they are! They have surpassed their own physical deficiency and explored a smoother and easier way of advancing by drawing strength and support from each other. Obviously, what is highlighted in the picture is cooperation.
In modern times, cooperation has become an efficient and effective way to solve many problems. To begin with, through cooperation, we can heighten our strength so as to accomplish the things that are impossible to be done only by one person. We all have our own limitations and with the fast development of science and technology, we are facing a world that is more and more sophisticated. Therefore, we often need to combine others abilities and resources to gain success. Whats more, cooperation is not the simple addition but fusion of all partners strength. Making use of different members strong points, offsetting the weaknesses, supporting mutually and sharing resources with each other, we can then attain to a capacity that is much stronger than the sum of all partners.
All in all, by cooperation among each other, we will be able to explore a wider world and reach further.上海地区考研英语阅卷点的工作非常认真细致——每次正式阅卷前，都会召集阅卷组长开会，讨论评分标准，确定具体的实施办法。
下面谈谈2005年组长开会的情况：
Section III Writing
Part A
51. Directions:
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
You do not need to write the address. (10 points)
Part B
52.Directions:
Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
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2005小作文评分指令
首先谈谈小作文。由于总分不高，所以如果出现格式错误，所扣分应不超过一分。格式包括右上角的日期，这个日期不写是可以的，但不能写在信的最后面。信应该包含抬头和最后的签名，Yours与下一行的署名如果紧靠左侧写不扣分。针对照抄指令的同学要扣分这一点，规定只要把原来句中的you改为I就不算照抄。
一定要包含三个要点，但是如果顺序颠倒，可以不扣分。例如有的同学一上来就表示抱歉，这是完全可以的。在列举原因的时候，可以是一个，也可以是多个。
在试卷上的指令中，要求该文章不少于100词，而评分标准上要求是100词左右。最终确定该部分低于90词要扣分。
该文章共分五个档次，组长会议建议实际操作中将大部分分数打在三档(5-6分)和四档(7-8分)。小作文应注意把握总体评分的原则。
2005大作文评分指令
大作文一定要注意做到总体评分。大部分分数应打到10-15分，属于三档(9-12)和四档(13-16)。标题有无均不计分，因为指令对此没有要求。如果跑题，严格扣分——这种情况是很少见的，就是学生对主题的把握完全错误，根本没有谈子女赡养父母的问题，而是谈了足球或者健康等问题。
大作文字数要求是160至200词，低于160词要扣分，具体做法是每少1~10词扣一分，依此类推。字数超出200词不扣分。
实际批改过程中的体会
批改时按照总体印象评分，换句话说，凭的是感觉。评分标准中规定了内容、结构与语言诸方面，而实际批改是将包含上述各方面的诸多因素综合考虑的结果。阅卷是一个动态过程，阅卷老师会先挂档，再进行微调。
在实际批改过程中，真实批改的速度越快，对内容与结构的关注程度就越低，而对语言的关注程度就越高。一般说来，只要满足了内容与结构的最低要求，大部分的注意力都集中在了语言上面。这也就是说，考生应围绕正确的主题来谈，而对思想的深度与创新性要求较少。结构上应包含各个要点，而出色的衔接与连贯肯定是加分点。由于时间紧，任务重，所以不大可能做到双人批改或一个人看两遍，只能做到少数文章抽检,所以衡量考生水平的最重要尺度还是语言。
总的说来，从上海地区的阅卷情况看，大家的写作水平有所提升，但是幅度并不明显。虽然大组长会议建议将大多数分数打在10至15分，可是真实操作中感觉平均分只有10分多一点点。
英语考试要人工批阅包括阅读的C节，也就是翻译以及两篇作文。在实际操作的过程中，为了节省时间，每个大组通常将阅卷老师分为翻译小组和作文小组，而某一位同学的小作文和大作文很可能是同一个人批阅的。那么，阅卷老师很可能在两篇作文之间建立关联，请大家切记。
小作文的批改比较轻松。由于篇幅短，信函的性质与要点均非常清晰，所以写作相对容易，最终得分为6分、5分和7分的非常多。
大作文的批改相对要难一些。可以看出，大部分同学对于图画作文还是比较熟悉的，都能严格按照提纲的三点来写。只有个别同学主题把握不准确，得到了极低的分数。但由于语言的精彩程度普遍较低，闪光点较少，所以得高分的同学不多。
此次阅卷的一个很深的感受是，很多同学因为字数不够而被扣分。考研的答题卡2与四六级等考试的完全不同，是横向双面设计。我清楚地记得，2004年阅卷时，正反都是22行。正面翻译每个三行，共五题，即十五行。下面还有七行，背面是22行。一般说来一行写十个字，那么如果没有题目的话，写到背面中间正好18行，即约180字，这样一目测就基本上知道是否应该被扣分了。而当时许多文章正面写得很好，反过来一看，戛然而止，分数就一下子扣掉了，很可惜。
2005年阅卷由于增加了小作文，大作文被安排在了背面，应当扣分的字数也由180词减少到160词。实际上，我们强烈建议大作文写到200词左右，正好写到将一页基本占满的感觉是最好的，字大小适中即可。
减少语言错误，提高语言准确性很重要。另一方面就是增加闪光点，除了结构清晰外，闪光点主要指好的词、词组或句型，一是使用恰当，二是要有变换。如果文章分为三段，那么起始段、结尾段和中间段落的开始部分非常关键。背诵的好词好句，一定要和具体的行文联系起来，融入到文章中去，不仅要用对，还要用好，避免给人突兀的感觉。
除了文章内在的因素之外，外界的因素对评分也有影响。干净整洁、字迹漂亮的文章肯定会比同样内容的乱涂乱画的文章得分要高。大家在平时写作时就应养成良好的习惯，将字写清楚，写整洁。
结语
综上所述，对于作文这一部分，大家应该首先了解不同文章的特点和规律，而后用心学习范文并进行模仿，然后练习全文写作并请老师批改再细细揣摩。通过这样的努力，大家的写作一定会有长足的进步。
阅卷心得体会—2006年我于2006年2月第三次担任了上海地区考研英语阅卷组组长，这里将此次的新体会写下来与大家分享。
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2006年的作文题目如下：
Section III Writing
Part A
51. Directions:
You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.
Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
Part B
52. Directions:
Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should
1. describe the photos briefly,
2. interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them,3. give your point of view.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
小作文
小作文是一封申请信(letter of request)，但是从题目上看，并不接近英美教科书中典型的应用文，而是带有中国特色的出题方式。大家一定要紧扣提纲，对情景有深入的理解和准确的把握。提纲与2005年第一次出的小作文题目一样，也是不采用分点罗列的方式，而是放在一起陈述，这与大作文是不同的。大作文绝大多数时候都会分点罗列。大家在行文中一定要注意涵盖要点，同时也要做到表达流畅、语言准确贴切。
请大家注意一个重要的细节，字不要写得太大。2006年的答题纸二是双面横向设计的，正面为22行，上面十行是五道翻译题，每题两行，每道题前均有题号，从46一直到50。下面十二行写小作文，前面有题号，为51。两种题目之间留有间隔，这种新的设计很不错。反面也是22行，所有行之间的间距相同。大家注意，这样的格子对于想写长文章的同学来说，是相当有限制的。大家的字一定要写得中等或偏小一点才能写得下并看上去舒服。由于加页是几乎不可能的，所以大家在一开始写的时候就要计划好。
正面的左侧约五分之一的地方自上而下分别是第二部分即阅读理解C节、第三部分写作A节及写作B节评分的地方，所以去掉这个区域，留给小作文的地方就更小了。建议大家将Dear Mr. Johnson这样的抬头紧邻着题号51写，日期在右边稍微抬高就可以了(上面说过这一行比较宽)。实际上不写日期也不会扣分，不过一定不要将日期写到信的最后去。信最后的落款要占两行，有一行写到十二行之外的页下空白处是无伤大雅的，而且很可能是非常有必要的。相反，如果连十二行都未占满，阅卷老师就有可能会考虑字数是否够。
由于教育部考试中心这次在下发《英语试题参考答案和评分参考》时并未象往年一样下发作文样卷，所以上海阅卷点的大组长们共同确定了十份样卷，也就是小作文5、6、7、8分各一份，大作文11、12、13、14、15、16分各一份。这些都是在字数符合要求的作文中挑选的。实际上绝大多数的小作文都取得了上面的分数。总体感觉似乎比去年好一点，去年是6分最多，其次是5、7、8分，今年感觉7分与5分的数量差不多，有的学校甚至7分卷更多一点。而大作文还是普遍没有大的改观，16分非常少，16分以上的寥寥无几，感觉总平均分仅比去年略高，但应该还是不到11分。可以看出，上海老师对大家的要求是相当严格的。许多老师都是多年阅卷的“行家”，对于文章的把握相当准确，对于分数的判定也相当敏锐。
今年阅卷有个感受，就是小作文的分数拉不开，得高分的大多是写得长的文章，把落款写到下面。很长时间来我都在细细揣摩阅卷老师们的微妙的心理反应与心理变化，对于这一点，我感觉很象国际象棋里的兵“触底成后”。
在写作小作文时，千万不要信口开河，如有个学生说每年想给资助的孩子二百万元，还有个学生自称是professor。有些学生对题目理解有误，这是不应该的，比如有个学生讲了一个具体的孩子的故事，说这个孩子很可怜，令人同情，所以要资助他。这道题是要求写明自己想要捐助怎样的孩子，这里要求写作者的想法，还不知道具体的孩子的情况。
小作文也应分段来写，不要只写成一段。
大作文
大作文不写标题不扣分，但是写错则会给阅卷老师留下不好的印象，这样就得不偿失了。请大家注意：最好不要反着写大作文。答题纸二的背面写大作文，看到上面的题号52，就不会搞反了。
大作文的字数不够肯定是要扣分的，今年的情况似乎更加严重。由于考研的答题卡设计较为紧凑，与四六级不同，所以写得短被扣分的幅度要更大。如果以中等大小的字体写满全页，当然在正常分段，每段开头均有空格的情况下，大概能写240词，而根据多年的写作批改经验——不超过240词，是绝对不会对阅卷老师产生“写得太长”的感受的。当然每个老师对长文章的感觉不尽相同，有的可能300词才觉得长，但是240词应该是低端临界值。
今年出现一个趋势，就是大作文的字数不够被猛扣分。有些同学功底不错，只是在考试时没掌握好时间，但这种错误有时可能是致命的。题目的要求非常清楚，要求大家写160至200词。不写到160词肯定扣分，这是毫无疑问的。原则上是少1-10词扣一分，但是字数不足很可能漏点，即三点只写两点或者一点，这样扣起来就厉害了。大家切记：参加写作阅卷的老师中有不少都是自己非常喜爱写作的人，越是这样的老师对字数少扣分扣得越狠。一般说来，不到16行肯定要扣分。另外，字写得差或模糊也是如此。有的同学长时间以来有不良的写作习惯。没有批过作文的人可能永远也想象不到看快没油的圆珠笔写成的作文时那种痛苦的感受，或者看到写一个词点一个点的作文时那种几近疯狂的感觉。
许多大组现在都和我们大组一样，自己分成两个小组，一组改翻译，一组改作文。所以小作文和大作文有可能由同一个老师改，但翻译由另一个老师改。有的大组在阅卷时将小作文和大作文也分开来改，这样更科学，但也需要更多时间。
在大作文中，切记千万不要抄阅读理解。今年发现有的同学将自己写的部分与抄的阅读部分间隔起来，阅卷老师给了3分。还有个同学前四段抄阅读理解原文，最后写了一句：Beckham is a English. I hate him.全文只有这一句与题目有关，后来根据轻易不判0分的传统，勉强给了1分。
写大作文时切记要扣紧主题，切不可离题太远，导致最后回不来或由于时间关系写不完。另外，各部分之间的比例应适当，如第一段就不要太长。与主题相关的关键词语要用对，如追星中的追求，可以用pursue，但不要把pursuit当成动词来用。
语言水平的提高决非易事，仅举两例。
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比如在最后下结论时，有的同学要表达“做自己”的概念，这里应使用“Be yourself”，但不少同学用“Do yourself”，这就不对了。
又如：I think this men who persuit stars have no culture.这个同学可能要表达“我认为这个追星的人没文化”的概念，可改为：I believe that this person who adores stars is not educated.
更好的写法是：Those people who are indulged in star worship, in my belief, are not independent individuals.
希望大家用心体会，多吸纳范文中好的词句，而后将它们有意识地用到自己的文章中，之后通过多次修正，必能获得进步。阅卷心得体会—2007年今年阅卷已是第九个年头，上海的试卷比去年减少了2.9%，是多年来首次出现减少。现将最新的感受记录下来，与大家分享。
今年的作文题目如下：
Section Ⅲ Writing
Part A
51. Directions:
Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
Part B
52. Directions:
Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) support your view with an example/examples.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)小作文
小作文是一封建议信(letter of suggestion)，与大学生活扣得很紧，是大家熟悉的话题，比较容易把握。题目特点是指令中的描述非常简单，只有一句话——写信给校图书馆，提出改进服务的建议。
小作文的分数差距不大。大部分同学都做到了结构完整、格式不出错的基本要求。
大作文
大作文非常玄妙，值得细品。首先，很可能从今年开始大作文将经历由时事向哲理过渡的重大变革。其次，出题人将尽量用图画来表达意图，而不借助或少借助图中或图旁的文字，这样意义表达得会更深刻，对考生的思考力和判断力的要求也就更高。第三，图画的含义深刻，可以接受的解释也较多，但要想取得高分，必须紧扣图画，把握住其中的精髓。最后，题目要求中明确提出要举例。这不是第一次，如2004年的大作文就曾提出要举例(support your view with examples)。还记得当年大家讨论后认为举一个或多个例子均可，今年的指令首次出现了an example/examples，这一方面可见出题人的精心，另一方面也可看出如果我们用心，就能够提前一步把握考研试题的发展方向。
今年判分更加严格了，这主要体现在大作文上。与主题无关的文章，如有些考生照抄阅读理解，一律给0分。如果考生没有理解图画的意思，扣分也非常厉害。比如有一个考生将漫画看成了三幅图，他描述道：一个小男孩在图一中玩足球，一个胖男人在图二中玩，一对老夫妻在图三中玩。三幅图的寓意是：每个人都应当锻炼身体。还有一位考生写道：可以看出一个人在射门，一只动物在守门——画图者提醒人们一定要爱护动物。有个考生写道，一个人射门，三个人守门，引申到有的政府部门一定要提高效率。另有个考生写道，一个强壮的人与一个弱小的人比赛，还让强壮的人先踢，这样的规则很不合理，由此引申到构建和谐社会一定要有人人平等的法律与规则。实际上，写成贫富差距、社会公平、生态平衡、自私问题或赡养老人问题的考生并不少。可能他们脑中已有了现成的文章，上了考场就往上硬套。有的考生虽然不算完全跑题，但也只能算是勉强有一点点联系，比如有个考生就写道：从图中写以看出，在任何时候脑中都应保留危机意识，这种意识对个人与社会的发展都有利。虽然其后的论证比较清晰流畅，但最关键的却缺失了——无法看出是怎么从图画推导出“危机意识”的。有的甚至将漫画中的人看成了鸡、鸭、猴等，很是令人失望。
至于模板，大家一定要理解清楚，根据不同的文章做相应的调整，这样才能取得良好的效果。这些年阅卷中常碰到一些文章，一看就知道背过我书里的范文——如果考生能吃透文章，并能根据具体问题做出适当的变化，就能获得满意的分数;如果是死记硬背，不考虑当前文章的实际，情况就不容乐观了。总之不能硬套模板。
现在的阅卷老师越来越认真负责，投机心理不可取，况且有些老师比较激进一点，对某些低级错误不会给多少分——出现一次可能还能容忍，一旦出现两次就很麻烦。所以大家先要保证不出低级错误，然后再尽量增加闪光点。
今年的高分比去年少，16分以上的文章就更少见了。今年第一次提出了“14分以上谨慎”的指导原则，因此这次大作文的平均分可能会偏低。当然这也与今年题目抽象度较高有关——虽然主题的界定比较宽，但要深入浅出，颇为不易。高速批改的阅卷者的心态变得更加微妙，可能变得更激进，更易由较少甚至单独的例证来作出判断，所以大家应该尽量减少无法容忍的错误。
今年答题卡的版式设计与去年完全一致，所以请大家好好看看我去年的心得。请大家最好将小作文写满12行，大作文至少写16行，要得高分至少要写18行。
其他一些具体的建议：态度要认真，字要写得尽量干净整齐;把作文写在规定的位置上，在两篇作文中均不要以标1、2、3的方式分点阐述，而是借助连接词等手段;不要将关键词写错，如有一个考生从题目到全篇都将confidence写作了evidence，这就很可惜;最好使用水笔，忌用铅笔，不宜用圆珠笔，使用钢笔要避免墨迹;不要空行、隔行写字，一定要按格子来写;不会写的词应该换个同义或近义词，一定要避免空着或写汉语。
随着这本小册子的再版，同学们的电话、短信与邮件纷至沓来，有时在食堂吃工作餐也有没教过的学生跑来请教——多是关于写作的捷径。今天我不想谈写作，而想谈谈硕士论文。写出一篇硕士论文的最好办法是从第一学期的课程中的某章某节最令你痴迷的一个微观的小问题开始，不断地搜集资料、阅读、思考、记录下心得……之后你就走上了奇妙的旅程，你不会觉得辛苦，也不会再对写作感到手足无措。欢迎大家与我交流，祝大家成功!
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