专项高分突破：名师帮你修改考研英语作文(5)

第二篇

2007年真题

Directions:

Write a litter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.

Do not write the address.

To Whom It May Concern,

　　As a student of this university, I would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation for your kind assistance as always (\). Meanwhile, I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning the quality of the library service.

　　In the first place, I find that most keyboards of the library computers are in poor operation (condition), which brings much inconvenience to the users. I would also recommend (suggest) the library to improve the efficiency of purchasing new books and subscribing to academic journals. Last but not least, the study rooms need to be furnished with a better lighting system.

　　I hope that you take my suggestions into serious consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Sara点评：9分，内容完整，条理清晰。注意个别相近词的区别！考研英语中会有许多相近词的辨析，更多的是体现在阅读理解部分，有些会用相近词作为迷惑人的选项。如果需要非常精准的话，会涉及到相近词更为细致的差别。如果这个部分比较薄弱，不妨让沪江或恩波的老师推荐一些考研英语常用的近义词的辨析资料。祝你09考研成功！