第二篇 结构科学 内容充实

　　2.1 考研写作应对对策Ⅱ：结构——注意逻辑

　　2.2 三段分别覆盖情况：

　　首段三种：图画描述、现象描述、寓意象征(可以在第二段)

　　中心段三种：原因分析、利弊分析、举例说明

　　尾段三种：判断评论&问题建议、个人选择、现实运用

　　2.3 详细解析

　　2.3.1 图画描述

　　四句：第一句对画面的简单概括，第二三句描写画面内容，最后一句点明中心，即象征或寓意(这句也可以放在第二段第一句：承上启下)

　　图画描述段的首尾句常用有：

　　(1)

　　A：一幅图首句：

　　※This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture。(extraordinary /meaningful)

　　※ As is shown in the picture, (depicted/conveyed/drawn/illustrated)

　　※ The picture shocks us beyond description。(reveals only the tip of an ugly iceberg。用于反面意义图画)

　　B:一幅图尾句

　　※ The meaning conveyed by the picture is clear but profound:揭示中心(drawing/photo)

　　※ It is obvious that…揭示中心

　　※ Obviously… 揭示中心

　　(2)

　　A：两幅图首句

　　※ The two pictures are interesting and thought-provoking。(extraordinary/meaningful)

　　※ As is shown in the first picture. 第一幅图描述 whereas the second picture depicts…第二幅图描述(depicted/conveyed/drawn)

　　※ As depicted in the pictures…第一幅图描述 and 第二幅图描述

　　※ As we can see from the first picture…第一幅描述，in the second picture,however…第二幅图描述

　　※ The two pictures reveal a not uncommon phenomenon that…总结画面图像

　　B：两幅图尾句

　　※ Comparing the two pictures,we can conclude that…揭示中心

　　※ The meaning conveyed by the pictures is clear but profound:揭示中心(drawing/photo)

　　※ It is obvious that…揭示中心

　　※ Obviously…揭示中心

　　※ It is not difficult to conclude the symbolic meaning of the pictures…揭示中心

　　2.3.2 现象简介

　　四句：第一句是对相关现状的概括介绍，第二三句进一步细节介绍，最后一句点明主题，可能带来的后果。

　　现象简介段常用首尾句：

　　A：首句(开门见山说现象)

　　It is really common that .。。介绍现象(有图说图，没图说事)

　　It is not uncommon that.。。介绍现象(有图说图，没图说事)

　　The drawing reflects the common phenomenon of…名词性现象描述

　　Recently，there has been a growing concern among the public over the issue/phenomenon that…介绍现象(有图说图，没图说事)(Today/Nowadays)

　　Lately，the discussion of…(现象)has aroused nationwide attention among the public。

　　B;尾句

　　The meaning conveyed by the phenomenon is clear but profound ：揭示中心…(revealed/implied)

　　The profound implication of the phenomenon is that…揭示中心

　　Therefore，it is obvious that…揭示中心

　　Obviously…揭示中心

　　2.3.3 寓意象征

　　四句：第一句对画面的简要评价，第二三句对画面简单描述，第四句得出结论，揭示主题。

　　如果出现在第二段就在第二三句进行拓展。

　　寓意象征段常用首尾句

　　A：首句

　　As can be seen form the picture，the drawer tells us that…说出画面的寓意(cartoon/photo)

　　What the picture illustrates is a profound topic in our daily life which often causes our concern…说出画面的寓意

　　It is not a difficult job for us to make clear the meaning of the picture…说出寓意

　　B;尾句

　　Therefore，…说出深层寓意(广泛的)

　　The majority of people would agree that…你的结论。

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