增补：虚拟语气版：

　　Were the situation to continue, it would become uncontrollable.

　　考研第二段就是以上内容的合理整合，加上第一句的论点

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food.

　　和最后一句的结论(威胁性总结)If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.

　　中间插入3-4句论据即可，成为一个夹心式的写法。一定不能写太多，第二段控制在5--6句，7句冲顶。

　　版本一 论点+原因+结论(黑字是第二段首尾，几个版本都不变，其他是根据刚才的分析加入的论据)

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. Several factors, both individual and social, could account for the negative phenomenon. On the one hand, a great number of people are only in pursuit of the maximum profit, totally ignoring the basic morality of the whole business. On the other hand, our legal system is far from perfect, which directly or indirectly provides the immoral businessmen with the chance of cheating. If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.

　　版本二：论点+现状+层进+结论

　　头尾两句不变

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. The past several years has witnessed/experienced the phenomenon that people in growing numbers suffered from the severe consequence of unsafe food. We can think of a variety of cheating phenomena in our contemporary society, such as the poisonous milk which results in prevalent infant kidney problem, and eggs which contain undesirable chemical factors. There is no denying the fact that the virtue of honesty should be accepted, appreciated and advocated by all the businessmen. Regrettably, the current situation is incompatible with this ideal concept. If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.(最后一句可省，因为太长了)

　　版本三：论点+后果+结论

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. Professional dishonesty undoubtedly exerts an adverse consequence on our society. Initially, they adversely affect the health condition of numerous consumers, for the reason that consumers can not easily recognize them. Additionally, fake goods pose a probable and potential threat on our national economy, because/as consumers do not believe the market system. In other words, this phenomenon will undermine the whole business. Finally, we have business with foreign countries. If fake goods are discovered in the overseas trade, it will undoubtedly exert a negative influence on our reputation. If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.(最后一句可省，因为太长了)

　　版本四：论点+现状+一点原因+一点后果+结论

　　1) Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. 2)We can think of a variety of cheating phenomena in our contemporary society, such as the poisonous milk and eggs, because a great number of people are only in pursuit of the maximum profit, totally turning a blind eye to the basic morality of the whole business. 3)In other words, professional dishonesty undoubtedly exerts an adverse consequence on our society. 4)If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.

　　1) 是深刻含义; 2)是现状+一点原因; 3)是后果; 4)是威胁性总结

　　西部大开发

　　1. 由浅入深Simple as the picture is, the connotation behind it should be taken into consideration with more insight and penetration.

　　2. 深刻含义Undoubtedly, this picture is thought-provoking, in that it endeavors to convince us that the development of the western part has been a prevalent and pervasive issue.

　　3. 现状：The past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that people in growing numbers have participated in the campaign.

　　或：The past several years have witnessed the increasing/soaring passion (enthusiasm) of people to join in the process. 补充：参与/投身于 的其他写法 be engaged in devote oneself in

　　4. 原因：

　　1) 东西部差异大，东部很多人生活富裕，而西部一些地区仍然贫穷

　　2) 这是和谐社会共同发展的需要。

　　3)BT理由，压力巨大。(稍微改写下，西部压力大就可以了)

　　这里暂且写一条：Some people in the developed areas are leading a luxurious life while in some underdeveloped regions, a great number of people are still living in sheer poverty.

　　5. 影响

　　1)可以有效解决东西部发展不均衡的问题

　　2)极大提高西部人民的生活水平

　　3)可以提高西部人民的教育文化水平

　　一个词：深远!

　　The movement, directly or indirectly, will exert a far-reaching influence on the western areas even the country as a whole. It can not only alleviate (减轻缓和，不会的话换relieve) the poverty of the underdeveloped areas, but also lay a solid foundation for the education level of the region effectively and efficiently.

　　6. 层进 西部大开发应该被accepted, appreciated and advocated.

　　7. 反面论证：要是国家不注意均衡发展，只顾东部，整个国家就会。

　　Suppose our government does not pay enough attention to the west, our whole country would become unbalanced and unable to survive and thrive (in the ruthless and relentless competition)

　　或者正面总结：Generally speaking, the phenomenon would continue to exert a beneficial influence on our society, if it is widely accepted, appreciated and advocated.

　　注：本文并未采用举例说明的论证手段

　　三分天下法：

　　Undoubtedly, the subtle connotation of the picture endeavors to convince us that the development of the western part has been a prevalent and pervasive issue. (论点)The drawing is thought-provoking, in that it contains three layers of profound meaning. (过渡句)Initially, the past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that people in growing numbers have participated in the campaign. Additionally, some people in the developed areas are leading a luxurious life while in some underdeveloped regions, a great number of people are still living in sheer poverty. Finally, the movement, directly or indirectly, will exert a far-reaching influence on the western areas even the country as a whole. Generally speaking, suppose our government does not pay enough attention to the west, our whole country would become unbalanced and unable to survive and thrive (in the ruthless and relentless competition)(结论)

　　总共6句话

　　第一句仍然直接说出深层含义(由浅入深的写法确实是比较弱智)

　　第二句是关键：这是一句过渡句，提示阅卷人，我接下来要分三点来分析这个问题，自己制造这句话，可以避免模板同时还可以提示脉络同时还可以顺便凑个字数

　　例句如下：

　　1. This picture is thought-provoking in that it conveys the following three layers of subtle connotations.

　　2. The subtle implication can be analyzed in the following three interrelated aspects.

　　3. In order to derive profound implication from it, we can dissect this enlightening picture in the following three aspects.

　　以上三句话的意思无非就是：考官注意啊，我要写三点了!

　　然后开始写自己的1，2，3每点一句话(当然如果你可以多写几句也不是问题，控制时间就OK)

　　第三句是第一点，initially/to begin with/first and foremost

　　第四句是第二点，additionally/what’s more/moreover/furthermore

　　第五句是第三点，finally/last but not least

　　至于最后一句第六句，以前怎么总结，现在还怎么总结，注意关联词Generally speaking。

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