2008年：合作

　　【审题构思】

　　第一段解析：这是一道单图题。图画中是两个都只有一条腿的人，丢开了拐杖，互相搀扶着往前走。 文字说明：“你一条腿，我一条腿;你我一起，走南闯北。” 根据我们课堂的讲解，单图题第一段写3句。图画描述应有两句，挖掘两个可写点，串成两句简单描述即可。最后一句可以对图画进行挖掘后总结，比如“他们有了互相的帮助，自信而乐观的迎接着挑战”(Undoubtedly, with each other’s help, they are embracing the upcoming challenges with confidence and optimism) 也可以对文字说明进行简单翻译，也就是我们课堂解释过的The caption reads/indicates,或者We are informed by the caption that “You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we can travel around the world.” 最后一句还可以简单发表评论，说明合作的重要性，但第一段始终是描述段，对深刻含义的评论不宜过多，一句即可，否则跑题。

　　不少考生反映，这一段最难的写的是“拐杖”这个词语。Crutch 对于考研的同学来说属于极其生僻的词语，改卷者也明白这个道理。只要你把这个意思表达出来就可以了，我们一直强调“第一秒写不出，第二秒换说法”，这里可以写为Supporting tools/assistant equipment/supporting sticks等等。

　　第二段解析：根据我们一直讲解的“天龙八部”写法，第二段应满足总分总的写法(或者是总分)。第一句要点明蕴涵在简单图画中的大道理，作为全段的主题句(论点)，结尾最好以Generally speaking之类的关联词总结全段(结论)。中间的论据我们可以选择事实和现状描述，问题背景，原因或后果，层进，举例说明。可以分析现代社会合作的原因和必要性，可以描述合作在各个领域里的现状(如个人层面，企业层面，社会层面)，可以讨论合作的好处，可以联系实际，举例说明合作的重要性。论点一句，论据4-5句，结论一句，第二段6-7句。

　　第三段解析：注意到提纲规定是“comments”。我们曾经对这个词进行过深入分析，水平高的同学可以自己发表议论，水平一般的人，可以把comments理解为suggestions, 于是回到我们最熟悉的建议措施段，坏事当然提建议，好事也可以提出建议，使其变得更好。在这一段里，主题句一句，从意义过渡到建议上来;具体评论或措施2句，写出层次感;总结加展望未来一句，第三段4句。注意：考研写作的观点并无对错之分，只要不跑题即可。06年可以写追星的负面意义，也可以正面挖掘积极方面;07年可以写为自信，也可以写为挑战，人生意义。08年的写作，写为合作，互相帮助，困难中互相扶持均属合理。在考研写作三大要素语言结构思路里，思路始终是次要的。关键是语言基本正确，结构清晰，逻辑严谨。

　　【参考范文】

　　The impressive and thought-provoking cartoon graphically portrays a moving scene invoving two handicapped men. The most striking feature of the drawing is that the two cripples, leaving their crutches behind and supporting each other with their powerful hands, are walking forward with confidence and optimism. In addtion, we are informed by the caption that “You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we can travel around the world.”

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to inform us that due attention has to be paid to the issue of cooperation, which is prevalent and pervasive in contemporary society. On account of the quickening pace of life, unprecedented competition in all walks of life makes it difficult for a single individual to finish an arduous task all by himself. The past several years have witnessed the increase of collaboration both academically and professionally. On the one hand, scholars and scientists benefit considerably from the coordinate efforts among a variety of universities. On the other hand, teamwork among different companies exerts an undeniably far-reaching impact on their development. Generally speaking, if we were isolated from the society, we would feel desperate in the ruthless and relentless competition.

　　Accordingly, it is imperative for us to derive positive implications from the profound picture. For one thing, we should be educated and enlightened to enhance the awareness of cooperation. For another, we can take advantage of the advanced science and technology to help us work with others effectively and efficiently. It is in this way that we can make our society develop in a prosperous, harmonious and dynamic direction.

　　2009年：网络的近与远

　　天龙八部之坏事版

　　Apparently, the purpose of the sketch is to convince us that considerable emphasis has to be placed upon the issue of Internet communication, which is prevalent and pervasive in contemporary society. Nobody could have failed to notice the fact people in increasing numbers are addicted to the cyber world, for the reason that surfing on line can provide them with fascination and recreation. Regrettably, we are so obsessed with the virtual world that we almost turn a blind eye to the real interpersonal communication around us, which not only poses a potential and probable threat on our normal contact with other people, but also makes our life isolated. Generally speaking, hardly can we maintain physical and psychological health if we were deprived of social communication.

　　4句话。第一句点明主旨：网络交流问题

　　第二句现状+原因分析：很多人沉迷于网络世界，因为网络的诱惑和娱乐。

　　第三句转折+结果：我们太迷恋而忽视了人际交往，这样对正常交流不好，也让我们隔绝开来

　　第四句威胁性总结

　　三分天下之坏事版

　　Apparently, the purpose of the sketch is to convince us that considerable emphasis has to be placed upon the issue of Internet communication, which is prevalent and pervasive in contemporary society. This picture is thought-provoking, in that it contains the following three layers of meanings. Initially, nobody could have failed to notice the fact people in increasing numbers are addicted to the cyber world, for the reason that surfing on line can provide them with fascination and recreation. Additionally, we are so obsessed with the virtual world that we almost turn a blind eye to the real interpersonal communication around us. Finally, hardly can we maintain close contact with people, both individually and socially, if we fail to attach great importance to social communication.

　　5句话。第一句深刻含义

　　第二句过渡句

　　第三四五句分论点1，2，3

　　双刃剑版

　　Apparently, the picture is a metaphor of a thought-provoking phenomenon: the Internet is a double-edged sword. (On the one hand)The past several years are accompanied by unprecedented development of the Internet, and people in mounting numbers are benefiting from its amazing convenience in communication. It can be aptly exemplified by the effective and efficient “chatting tools(softwares)” ranging from QQ to MSN. Regrettably(On the other hand), unable to resist the fascination and temptation of the cyber world, a great number of people fail to notice the importance of social activities and interpersonal communication. If we let the situation go as it is, the phenomenon would become unimaginable and uncontrollable/people would suffer from severe communication crisis.

　　5句话

　　第一句点明主旨双刃剑。

　　第二句说明网络发展对交流的好处--拉近我们的距离

　　第三句举例说明好处(2，3两句是正面描述)

　　第四句说明沉迷网络缺乏交流的现状

　　第五句威胁性说明网络的坏处--拉远了我们的距离(交流危机)(4，5两句是反面描述)

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