>>>>考试吧策划：2015年考研报名时间及指南专题

　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　8-10分

第一篇

　　Dear Tommy,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you timely returning admission ticket to me.

　　If it had not been for your assistance in warmheartedly picking up my admission ticket and getting it back to me, I fear that I would have been missed my law exam held for once a year.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who came to help me and saved me from the trouble. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Jane Yang

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Tommy,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you timely returning admission ticket to me.

　　If it had not been for your assistance in warmheartedly picking up my admission ticket and getting it back to me, I fear that I would have been missed(改为missing) my law exam held for once a year.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who came to help me and saved me from the trouble. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Jane Yang

　　8分

　　同学你好，作文写的很不错，但是要注意虚拟语气的用法，建议再复习一下。

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