2007年江西中考英语满分作文

　　中学生学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。某英文报“学生习作”专栏正在就“学生适当的放松方式”这一话题进行征文。假设你是二十二中初三(3)班的班长，最近你对班上同学课后放松方式进行了调查。请根据表格提供的调查信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投稿。

　　对 象： 二十二中初三(3)班

　　人 数：60人(男：31人;女：29人)

　　常用放松方式：

　　1.看电视(30人)

　　2.玩电脑游戏(12人)

　　3.听音乐(8人)

　　4.进行体育锻炼(5人)

　　5.没有时间放松(5人)

　　你的观点 哪一种(些)放松方式是适当的?

　　为什么?

　　注意：

　　1.短文包括对调查相关信息的介绍和你自己的观点;

　　2.词数：80-100。题目和开头已为你写好，不记入总词数。

　　The Proper Way(s) for Students to Relax

　　I am the monitor of Class3,Grade 3,No.22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. __________________

　　满分作文

　　The Proper Way(s) for students to Relax

　　I am the monitor of Class 3, Grade 3, No. 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.

　　There are 60 students in my class (31 boys and 29 girls).Different students have different ways to relax. Half of the students often watch TV. 12 students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax.

　　As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax. I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides, it can help improve our health. Therefore, I often play pingpang.

　　点评：第一段和第二段是叙述表格中的信息，第三段是表达自己的观点。在叙述信息时，作者使用了简洁地语言把意思准确地传达出来;在抒发自己的观点时候，作者详细地阐明了自己的观点。详略得当，衔接自然，结构紧凑，不愧为一篇佳作。